![]() ![]() Also, it should be “written from” not “written in”. I would revise the beginning to make it clear that critics/listeners may perceive it as a love song as I think that it was you are really getting at with this contrast. You say in the beginning that it was written from a romantic perspective, yet contradict it in the second half by saying they wrote it about their bond as a group. I am confused by the following sentece (Although it is written in a romantic perspective, "Down" was inspired by the group's bond as a quartet and the adversities they have faced together and individually.).For this part (has a production consisted of bass, snare drums, synths and soft finger-snaps.), the word “consisted” should be “consisting” given the context of the sentence.For the first sentence, include the year in which the album was released in parenthesis after the title.I will bring this up again in the appropriate section. When looking at the references, the critics do refer to it as a dancehall song so you just need to adjust the part in the body of the article. Saying that a song is part of a genre and that it contains elements of the genre of two different things. In the body of the article, however, you say that it “features elements of dancehall music”. In the lead and infobox, you identify the song as being a dancehall composition. ![]()
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